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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

I loved how you subvert expectations by killing a character we’re primed to root for. It's really bold storytelling. I am looking forward to reading the next part.

I also have a personal question I wanted to ask, I left it inbox, when you have time please check it out.

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Devyn T Moore's avatar

Thank you! I really appreciate your kind words.

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Ahh I loved this so much!! And I kind of love that we like Hysa so it’s a big 🤯 when he dies.

And I’m sorry ma’am but the poison?? Is U going to be ok?? 🥺🥺

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Devyn T Moore's avatar

Like how cool would the story be if it was about Hysa, son of a poisoner and Duelist, who turned his back on it all to become a soldier? A heart of gold and the blade of steel. Instead, we get a monster who is mean AND a murderer.

Who writes this shit? They need to get their shit together.

Guess we will see muhahaha

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Yeah let’s get the author on the phone and ask what her deal is??

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Devyn T Moore's avatar

The author sounds like a psycho lol

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